I'd say that this was half way between a Fukinagashi and Literati. If it is to represent the Yellow Mountain trees, they are flat topped. If you took off the apex and let it be flat it would look more natural in not Japanese style - but the Yellow Mountains are in China. On the other hand if it is to be more Japanese then I would accentuate the windswept feel much more. This is a nice composition but it feels kind of half way between the two potentials. Either way I think this would be great - well done nice work.