Bonsai Stick Figures with special guest Rick Martin

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Bonsai is about evoking feelings. Like all art, the feelings may be simple or complex. Maybe a past memory or childhood remembrance. Maybe the tree you proposed to your sweetheart under or carved your initials. The point is stirring a feeling or emotion is what art is all about. To remove the art aspect of the hobby removes emotion or feeling leaving a viewer flat.

The ways we create emotion or feeling in our work is to add movement, visual speed, forced perspective and human visual cues. These human cues are sub-conscience and seen without notice. If I draw to figures on a piece of paper, two emotions or feelings are felt. On the left we feel youth, young, sky reaching. On the right, we feel heavy load, old, sagging, reaching for the ground.

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We can use these to our advantage. We strive to make our trees look old. We help convey that age by drawing our branches in a down word direction helping convey a sagging old feeling. The stick figures above are not very interesting. The straight lines are boring and have no movement. Movement also adds age. Young trees grow fast and quick to get the best advantage for sunlight. This is best achieved by growing straight up and fast. gravity is less due to the powerful growth of young trees. As a tree ages this gravity starts to take effect and droop branches downward only to have the new buds in spring direct new growth upward, and have it droop again in the coming years. This constant sagging and upward growth adds movement to the branches as well as the trunk as it seeks the best opportunity for light. If we add movement to the above stick figures what can we learn.

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The figure on the right is still youthful but has more grace and femininity, another human cue, "gender". We associate tall and graceful with feminine and stocky and twisted with masculine. The figure on the right is crooked and bent and twisted with a sagging branch, definitely old and masculine.

The scalene triangle.
This is probably the most important aspect of creating a good tree. A scalene triangle is one that does not have equal length sides nor even angles. On the left is a scalene triangle and on the right is the principle applied to a drawing of a tree. On most trees the canopy should be in the shape of a triangle. For the sake of simplicity lets keep to basics and simple rules of artistry before we go breaking them. A triangle canopy is equally important horticulturally because the shorter branches on top keep from shading the branches below them.

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Before we move on lets recap:
  • Movement in the trunk and branches adds dynamism
  • Tall, graceful subtle bends mean feminine
  • Jagged twisting exaggerated movement means masculine
  • Downward bending branches mean great age
  • A scalene triangle shaped canopy is essential.
 
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Now we move to the Rick martin part of the program. In my journey with bonsai I have been fortunate to be asked to do lectures, workshops and demo's. One of my best teaching aids is to have people reduce their trees to stick figures. I feel there is no better way to get a feel of how a tree is moving along. One could even keep a notebook of drawing thru the years with the actual tree in black and additions as a future shape drawn in red. I have taken the liberty to spend several hours tonight of my extremely valuable time away from helping my wife around the house and actually working on another juniper tonight. Thi is what I found out.
Lets start out with Ricks trees.

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Now we can apply the triangle principle to the stick figures and see how they hold up.
First one of the good trees.

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This tree does not really have the bones of a triangle canopy. It is more of a parallelogram.

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Whats good about the exercise and is that we can play with the image and draw right over it and see how we can trim or wire for shape the tree to better fit the ideal shape. Maybe some of that branch could be removed thats out of the triangle or grow the other longer to better fit with the long upper branch. Or, wire and fan the foliage in the long branch to fit with in the triangle boundries. Maybe that long branch could be bent up and the other moved around to conform to a different shaped triangle.

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Or maybe like this
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For the final test, we can look at the stick figures as a whole and determine what it is about some that don't look like the other.

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What we see is the first row is young and juvenile looking while those on the second row have downward bending branches. The top row lacks movement in the trunks and branches while those below are full of interesting turns and twists. The top row lack orderly canopies that tell a story while those below seem to have lived a long life of torture and perseverance.

If you have enjoyed this exercise please write a review of my work here
 
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Mr Smoke, when you start in on a new tree (before Bonsai Styling) do you draw line sketches like in your examples to get an idea of where you are going ???

I appreciate your Post, very informative....

However, I have seen many, many Forest's and Groupings that employ the triangle
styling in their settings, Forest's don't grow that way they tend to grow in a linear and vertical fashion...Could you Please address this concept of triangular forest and groups...???
 
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That was awesome. I'm a rank beginner, and new to art as well. I'm taking a class here and there as well as trying to figure out what it is I like about the bonsai that speak to me. then i need to gigutr out how to grow/shape what isnt there. It is kind of daunting. This was enormously helpful. Thank you for taking the time to write it up.

Jacob L'Etoile
 

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Simply but very helpful in designing bonsai!
 

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Mr Smoke, when you start in on a new tree (before Bonsai Styling) do you draw line sketches like in your examples to get an idea of where you are going ???

I appreciate your Post, very informative....

However, I have seen many, many Forest's and Groupings that employ the triangle
styling in their settings, Forest's don't grow that way they tend to grow in a linear and vertical fashion...Could you Please address this concept of triangular forest and groups...???
. The tree/s in the center are generally the oldest, they have put out seeds which are the slightly shorter trees, those put out seeds to make even smaller and younger trees, and so on. The oldest will always be the biggest and tallest, so as the distance gets further from the main tree, so do the trees them selves giving the triangular shape.

Aaron
 

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Mr Smoke, when you start in on a new tree (before Bonsai Styling) do you draw line sketches like in your examples to get an idea of where you are going ???

I appreciate your Post, very informative....

However, I have seen many, many Forest's and Groupings that employ the triangle
styling in their settings, Forest's don't grow that way they tend to grow in a linear and vertical fashion...Could you Please address this concept of triangular forest and groups...???
Think of the forest plantings as more like groves of trees.
 

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Well if your goal was to run me off. It worked. I am officially done here. If you wanted to teach me something you could have done it without my name in the title.
 

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Well if your goal was to run me off. It worked. I am officially done here. If you wanted to teach me something you could have done it without my name in the title.
DISLIKE!
Don't leave, I'll agree it's uncool to use people's trees as demonstrations if the owner didn't have a say in it. Stick around and just ignore what bugs you, that's what I do!

Aaron
 

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I thought it was flattering. Rick asked for people to comment about his trees, and was upset that people weren't offering criticisms, even if they were harsh. He insisted he had a tough hide. He gets a thread devoted to helping him and focusing on just the trees he's been asking about and... - ????
 
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