Just curious, since I am fairly new to this wonder world of Bonsai, what rules are being broken with this tree?
The following is based upon my study of classical bonsai:
The tree is planted in a round pot, but it’s not centered in the pot. It moves strongly right, then left. But not “up” so much. Usually, oval pots are used, or perhaps a relatively deep rectangle to “ground” the tree. Horticultural, planting as close to the edge of a pot weakens the rootage on that side. It’s better to be more centered for the health of the tree.
Style wise, we have an unobstructed view of the trunk, which then turns back, away from the viewer. Then, the trunk line is obscured by foliage, so we really can’t tell what’s happening, then you see a section shooting straight up in the upper middle portion of the foliage supporting the apex. It “looks” like that exposed section comes from farther of the left? And kinda snakes it way up? Does it come off the long branch that comes off the back and arches over to the left? Or is there a more continuous trunk line that is obscured by that row of folige? Can’t tell from the photo.
There’s branches growing out of the insides of curves, the apex is rather pointed, stuff like that.
The thing is, I can’t really tell “if I like it or not” from the photo. From the photo, the whole tree seems to moving away from the viewer. But, maybe in person, it doesn’t feel that way.
One thing I would do for sure is lower the apex. The wood shows a jog back to the right up in the apex, and then it goes pointed. To my eye, something has caused the tree to stop moving to the right, and move left. Strongly. And now, suddenly it grows back to the right? And sharply pointed? I think it would be better to have a soft crown, not a sharp crown, and no obvious movement back to the right.
Just my thoughts.