Al, as you know, chinese elms and Zelkova are similiar, yet different. The CE have much shorter internodes, and naturally smaller leaves than Zelkova.
But, what I would do, based upon my prior post would be to shorten the whips back to the canopy profile, maybe one or two internode lengths back into the canopy. Then defoliate all the leaves, cutting the leaves off with sharp sissors right at the stem.
While it's defoliated, I'd remove any interior crossing branches. For brooms, I like the branches to be reaching up like a Y. It appears there are some branches coming off the trunk at too much of a horizonal angle. With all the folliage, I can't say for certain what needs to be done. Remove them? Wire them? Bunch them up with raffia or haystring over the winter? Sorry, I can't tell what to do about that from the photo. Is there a bit of reverse taper there where the branch on the right is? Also, it appears that there is no taper above where the first branches start. Again, maybe there is, I can't properly tell from the photo.
Now, I will have to say, I'm not a shohin kind of guy! I've seen your work, and it's excellent. So, I'm not trying to say "I'm right, you're wrong", I'm here to learn new tricks, and share those that have worked for me.
But, as I said, if I'm blind please enlighten me!
Thanks,
Adair
Edit: I think our posts crossed!