Well, I do have a couple of observations. The straight branch. I don't think it is that much of an issue. It seems like it because the tree is so bare. However, if you can just pull it down a bit, it would look better. Also, when the foliage grows in, it might hide the branch.
Second, the young branch above it could substitute. If you cut the straight branch off, then wire the branch above it, down, eventually, it will fill it that space. I think this would work even more so because the branch underneath the straight one, looks like it splits into 2 main sections. So the back section of that branch could fill in the negative space as a back and side branch in one. Does any of this make sense? Sometimes it is tough to explain with out having the tree to demonstrate.
Rob