Feedback on my first video

[leatherback]

all the discussion on my poor voice, decided to do a video without speech instead.

Restyling an overgrown Larix bonsai - Growing Bonsai

Sometimes you get the option to buy overgrown bonsai. In this case, I bought this Larch. A year later, it is now healthy enough for a restyling.

www.growingbonsai.net

 

[HorseloverFat]

all the discussion on my poor voice, decided to do a video without speech instead.

Restyling an overgrown Larix bonsai - Growing Bonsai

Sometimes you get the option to buy overgrown bonsai. In this case, I bought this Larch. A year later, it is now healthy enough for a restyling.

www.growingbonsai.net

Haha!! I, personally, said your voice was WELL-proportioned/evolved... i just like discussing accents and dialects.

 

[HorseloverFat]

Awesome, video, though!

Needs....

your voice.

 

[Mapleminx]

all the discussion on my poor voice, decided to do a video without speech instead.

Restyling an overgrown Larix bonsai - Growing Bonsai

Sometimes you get the option to buy overgrown bonsai. In this case, I bought this Larch. A year later, it is now healthy enough for a restyling.

www.growingbonsai.net

Noooo we need the voice!

 

[Kadebe]

all the discussion on my poor voice, decided to do a video without speech instead.

Restyling an overgrown Larix bonsai - Growing Bonsai

Sometimes you get the option to buy overgrown bonsai. In this case, I bought this Larch. A year later, it is now healthy enough for a restyling.

www.growingbonsai.net

Very good video... missing the voice though

 

[Mapleminx]

See, the opinion is unanimous. Bring back the voice!

 

[ShadyStump]

Could do worse.
You could be Swedish.

 

[Potawatomi13]

Personally no complaint about camera or voice. However full frame picture infinitely better.

 

[leatherback]

However full frame picture infinitely better

I think you mean like this?

 

[Wires_Guy_wires]

Landscape mode looks much better. Nice video!
Lovely winter vibe with the dark background.

 

[Eckhoffw]

I am afraid this is the normal way for me to speak English. But then again, lived and worked in Australia, the UK and Canada. So my accent might reflect the speech in those countries more than how my countryman speak. Working in an international environment with , I think, 60 nationalities also helps.

Either way, super sexy.
With the audio advice/improvements, your going to entrance your viewers!
Keep those videos coming!

 

[Clicio]

Very well done.

 

[leatherback]

Still trying to figure out what works..

[https://www.growingbonsai.net/young-larch-bonsai-group-rewiring/]

 

[HorseloverFat]

Still trying to figure out what works..

[https://www.growingbonsai.net/young-larch-bonsai-group-rewiring/]

I like it.. transitions are real smooth.. and not visually alarming. (Except that one early one with inconsistency in the text's exits )

Music Fits work/lapse very nicely.

I feel that the commencing text should be narrated.

 

[Clicio]

Congrats for the group!
It's becoming really nice.
Two little things about the video bother me:
- The music starting only when the timelapse begins;
- The main focus image (the tree) being too much to the right on the frame, could be a little more centered.
Congrats!

 

[leatherback]

- The main focus image (the tree) being too much to the right on the frame, could be a little more centered.

grmpf. I noticed AFTER the video that the tree moved a little every time I worked it. I did high res so I moved the video with the tree, as much as possible

 

[HorseloverFat]

- The music starting only when the timelapse begins

Ah yes!

This made me check the "mute" and rewind to see if I missed any audio from the beginning..

Good note!

 

[ShadyStump]

I don't think the music starting where it did was much of a problem. I liked the effect of the music synchronizing with the work time lapse.
Narration, like @HorseloverFat suggested, may help the, "mute check," impulse, but I think it might not fit the feel of the rest of the video.
I would look into some sort of short opening theme with sound to got at the very beginning of the video. All of a 3 to 5 second intro theme would be plenty to smooth the continuity, as well as help branding.

 

[Kadebe]

I would look into some sort of short opening theme with sound to got at the very beginning of the video. All of a 3 to 5 second intro theme would be plenty to smooth the continuity, as well as help branding.

Star Night - Wonderland

https://artlist.io/?utm_source=google&utm_medium=cpc&utm_campaign=13685098517&utm_content=125777270082&utm_term=background%20music%20for%20video&keyword=background%20music%20for%20video&ad=550490075257&matchtype=b&device=c&gclid=CjwKCAiA0KmPBhBqEiwAJqKK446u9_K8midrDc7VMp2kMq463_yl_FX6t_q0mHGYz7BV-uFXpRVjvRoC5YIQAvD_BwE

 

[leatherback]

we need the voice

check

commencing text should be narrated.

check

main focus image (the tree) being too much to the right

check

some sort of short opening theme with sound to got at the very beginning

check!

Night

Yawn, Nightwork you mean, Check!



Next release in 2 weeks or so. Still figuring out this horribly complex software