Homage to late teacher - new painting

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Earlier in '25 a local bonsai master passed away who I learned a lot from and had an immense amount of respect for, though I'd only known him for a year when I volunteered at the studio one day a week.

The tree is a mother-daughter Communis juniper, and the last tree I worked on with him, and for which he also left me the most creative freedom of any tree I'd worked on before. I'll title the painting 'teacher-student juniper' instead.

I usually don't care much for symbolism in painting but here I found it fitting. The Mother (or teacher) tree is in shadow for the obvious reason, with a weak overhead light to still give it some light and to show that the teacher is not forgotten, while leaving the child/student tree in the spotlight to show how the teacher illuminates, or raises up the student, so to speak. The setting sun scroll illustration of course also to illustrate the sun setting on his life.
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Here's the original tree just after I'd finished work on it in late '24. We didn't get around to repotting it.
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Clearly the tree was still in early development so I tried to paint it in a more mature state. I'd love to hear your (constructive) feedback on my design of the tree in the painting. It wouldn't be too late to still tweak a pad or two.

Apparently the tree got sold while I took a break from volunteering at the studio in early '25 and before the master passed away. Now obviously I immensely regret not buying it, but I didn't have a lot of money, or a really good spot at home. If I'd known I'd have made space in both budget and garden, but you can't always know what'll happen and the meaning something takes on after it does.

I doubt the buyer would happen to be on this forum but if you are, please show me, I'd love to see how it's doing 😅
 
Love this!! So thoughtful and very nicely done!!!

I would leave it at that except that you did ask for some feedback and suggested the work is still in progress so I would share two thoughts for your consideration

The pot I think is a wonderful design for the tree but for me the tree is slightly too far to the right within the container.

I also think it would be really nice if the “teacher” tree had a small depth branch carrying down to exist behind the student tree. This would obviously be evolving the piece significantly compared to your last actual picture so might feel less appropriate but I do like this both from a bonsai design and also symbolic perspective to have the teacher tree connected to the student tree visually
 

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Love this!! So thoughtful and very nicely done!!!

I would leave it at that except that you did ask for some feedback and suggested the work is still in progress so I would share two thoughts for your consideration

The pot I think is a wonderful design for the tree but for me the tree is slightly too far to the right within the container.

I also think it would be really nice if the “teacher” tree had a small depth branch carrying down to exist behind the student tree. This would obviously be evolving the piece significantly compared to your last actual picture so might feel less appropriate but I do like this both from a bonsai design and also symbolic perspective to have the teacher tree connected to the student tree visually
I appreciate the feedback! I agree the placement in the pot looks a little awkward but I tried many different proportions and placement in the sketch phase and when I made the pot smaller I felt like there was too much overhang on the left and made it look unbalanced.
I like your idea of a branch of the teacher passing behind the student, but am worried it'll look too busy, or make the main tree look too symmetrical. Maybe if I move it up a little from where you have it in your sketch, and extend the bottom right branch to compensate? I'll try it out in a sketch
 
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