Want to purchase this bald cypress and make it a shohin but everything I picture just doesn't seem right to me. Any ideas?
By no means a bald cypress expert, but personally i think those two branches are too thick in relation to the trunk, especially if a shonin sized tree.
Personally i would cut down to just after the first branch and grow the first branch as the new leader for a year or two. If it grows anything like mine, this "branch" will be or almost be as thick as the rest of the trunk, which should make the taper change less dramatic. During this time i would attempt to encourage the lower buds that i see to form branches, taking care to not let them thicken up too quickly.
One possibility is the below
Or possibly apply above and wire the new leader across for a more classic style
There is another more slanting style on the other side, but i prefer the above two possibilities .
Now to se what the pro's say