IMO, Sansuiga (landscapes) is not a very good scroll for a display with bonsai. I much prefer a single element of the scroll art to be on my scroll. In this case, the mountain, the birds or the clouds. The trees would be redundant. Actually while maybe being relaxing and serene, there is an awful lot of stuff going on in that scene for bonsai display. I look at this from a Kei Do POV
Just a question, you have shown some nice scrolls and scenes over the years. What do you use for photography? Your pictures are lousy and blurred, at angles, not straight and off center. Whats the deal?
I'm glad you posted the disclaimer at the end, I was hoping to get rich posting this all over the net!!!
So placing a black pine on a cliff near the coast is not an appropriate motif? TBH, I don't really care about studying a defunct organization system, that evolved into a more current system. 形道 has it's disciples in the US, particularly CA, because that is the system that the Ragles, and Kathy Shaner studied in the past.
As for the chop deal....definitely a Keidou idea....But look at the picture in detail. Does it evoke the warming of spring? Do you feel renewed growth of the grasses? From my personal experience in Cache Valley where I grew up, most mist or fog (not clouds) occurs in the colder times leading up to winter. So if you want to use it as a Spring scroll, I am sure you could place it in there and maybe get the desired feeling. As for the importance of chop placement, Gaddou practitioners break it about 40% of the time. From the words of my mentor in display....If everything works to express the desired display idea, tree, tree style, scroll image, and surrounding accents, why would you disqualify the scroll for the small chop (signature) that may be in the wrong location?
As for the question regarding my pics, I spend 8 hours labor or more to finish a scroll. The picture is quickly done as a service to the customer, and in this case, the customer actually requests me to put this disclaimer. You see, the family sold their art collection to the owner of a famous Japanese bakery brand after their parents died. This particular daughter loved her Father's Japanese art collection so much, she made prints for her to hang at various times for personal use. This is #13 of I don't know about 150. Since these pieces are often exhibited in museums, taking crappy pictures does not devalue the current owner's holdings or the museums in which they reside.
And personally, I would prefer to spend the limited time resource I have on production of the scroll, than post production marketing.