Got it. thanks for the feedback. I tried that angle, didnt like it as much. thoughts?Hmmm, from my perspective, the two trunks are moving away from each other and don’t seem to belong on the same tree. I d be wanting to tilt this trunk in the opposite direction and have both trunks moving to the right.
Much better. Move the canopy of the left trunk to the right a bit more and you’ve got a winner.Got it. thanks for the feedback. I tried that angle, didnt like it as much. thoughts?
Really? You prefer that inclination? Maybe its my shitty photography ... who knows? I'll reconsider this....thanksMuch better. Move the canopy of the left trunk to the right a bit more and you’ve got a winner.
Yup... from the movement of the lower trunks, the deadwood, the positioning of the trunks... everything seems better tipped to the right.Really? You prefer that inclination? Maybe its my shitty photography ... who knows? I'll reconsider this....thanks
Not shitty photography at all. you obviously took the time to style and wire out the tree properly. And I agree with @Dav4 the tree in my eye wants to move right. The Jin in the first pic moving vertically is a visual barrier for each trunk and if tilted right, even more than you have in the second pic? would help. Just my opinion of course. Regardless, Kudos to you for truly taking time to fully wire and style the tree.Really? You prefer that inclination? Maybe its my shitty photography ... who knows? I'll reconsider this....thanks
I think the bottom right branch/trunk should be jinned. I love clumps/multitrunks as much as anyone, but here it doesn’t feel coherent for me. I’d keep a lot of it as deadwood.
GREAT tree. I’d love to have this in my garden
Hartinez, you make a good point to consider, thank you for your feedback.Not shitty photography at all. you obviously took the time to style and wire out the tree properly. And I agree with @Dav4 the tree in my eye wants to move right. The Jin in the first pic moving vertically is a visual barrier for each trunk and if tilted right, even more than you have in the second pic? would help. Just my opinion of course. Regardless, Kudos to you for truly taking time to fully wire and style the tree.
Great piece of material. I agree with the others I like the tilt to the right. The straight vertical jin in your current orientation is a bit distracting. Either a tilt to the right the tree moves more with your chosen defining branch. I find the heavy jin on the left a bit distracting too. In the future maybe consider reducing it. Looks like a fun project.