willhopper
Shohin
Someone gave me a Red Roselle (Hibiscus Sabdariffa) and I had a little fun with it. Is this considered literati?
I would consider that one INVISIBLE !Someone gave me a Red Roselle (Hibiscus Sabdariffa) and I had a little fun with it. Is this considered literati?
right now looks like a sapling.
I don't like it. Here's why...
Literati is all about the line of the trunk. If you took the line of the trunk, and in Photoshop, just drew a black line on it... what would it say? It would look like a lazy loopy sad thing... that didn't really say anything. (I hope I am not being too harsh I am being totally open and not intending any slight or disrespect).
Instead, I would advise you to find your favorite literati tree online... and copy the line exactly. Style your tree thus, and ask - why does it work? What is it about the lines and proportions that gives it that emotional impact?
First thing I will say is that it is a rare tree in nature that grows in curves. So don't style your tree that way. Give it angles, which connotes stress and energy. Make it feel like a tree in nature that has been subjected to the elements. Think about it in your mind... and then style what you see. I have a feeling you won't see a curvy trunk (in your mind).
Thanks. I have always enjoyed and welcomed constructive criticism..
will say, the title of this thread came with a question mark, as did my post, wondering if it is literati. I just experimented with wiring, bending and such,
Good to know your thoughts, it really helps.
Literati is unusual for trees that aren't coniferous, that doesn't mean you can't try!
Here's what I think you should shoot for!
I really like this tree. what kind of tree is this?