Im crap with conifers but:
looks like the initial pic shows a angle change? I like it.
it would make a good slant style, and the long straight trunk will get covered up a bit if you angle it and bring some branches down. If you did this, you may not need to hack the trunk at the y, just thin out the lower y... and apex too, actually thin out the whole thing while you wire.
but short of drastic chopping, the best style advice I could offer is to bring the branches down.
It might make a good literati, but I personally don't really care for them... thanks for sharing!