So this one bothered me at first, after thinking about it.....and reading the posts, it still does.
That Jin. Or it, with the whole of the tree.
First, I love your first branch being anywhere concept, this one dead makes it that much more interesting, and applicable, I think a lot of folks should follow this advice.
The concept of fire death, made me think It would look better charred. A bit black.
But.....the apex seems a lil too perfect for this to be the case. To fit the story.
Call the tree 100 years old. It would have taken 75 years to reach that height, and another 75 to form the new apex.
This makes it unbelievable to me. 150 years.
If you shorten it (jin) greatly, and char it, down the whole Shari, you could turn it into a three hundred year old tree, with a more believable story.
Without that jin, it would be, as JKL puts it, another ho-hum semi- cascade.
I came back to these to support the artistic movement.
Sorce