My new literati JBP

[ihaveaspaceship]

The trunk gets too straight at the first bend if its rotated in between. Doesnt have as powerful of a look.

 

[Adair M]

On literati like this, it’s best to not have foliage taller than the top of the trunk. So, your apex of foliage is too high. It’s above the sharp bend in the trunk.

Here’s my literati as an example: