Good start to windswept style juniper. Everyone is going to have a slightly different view of how they would do it and that's fine too.
My first advice would be (at some stage but not now) thin and reduce the foliage on those branches. In my experience, trees that grow in windy places don't tend to have big, full branches so less foliage would make the composition more believable IMHO.
I second the advice to add a location to your profile. Hard to give good advice when we don't know if you are in spring or autumn, cold or tropical.