Formal display for discussion VIII

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Whats wrong with this display?

Whats right about this display?
 

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Fans! I love fans! I'm a fan of fans! The scroll struck me first, since right now I'm on dial up and it showed up first, and it's an image of a fan. I saw the echo with the foliage canopy of the tree, and unless I am totally blind, the figure is also holding a fan.

It's a nice, well constructed display. However, the figure on the left is too far left, and the entire idea seems a bit shallow for me. Unless, of course, I have completely missed the idea of this one and am way out in left field. Which has never happened before. I swear.

Chris
 

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I'm not a "fan" of the scroll. It seems a little too wide and doesn't add much interest. I agree that the accent piece is too small and too far to the side.
What's right about the display, I like the tree.
Mary B.
 

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I, too, liked the subtle fan scroll and its relationship to the canopy of the tree. The image on the viewers left seems as if it might add to the dynamics if it were a bit closer. It is interesting to see the tree to the right of the scroll, that is not seen very often. Nice display.
 

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