I was thinking similarly about the planting angle but I'd done enough butchering so I rotated the tree approximately 30 degrees right of it's original orientation, gave it a kiss, and called it good for now.
I don't have a lucid, analytical, in depth response to your reply Vance since I've spent the last 6 hours or so at the bar and at after-bar activities however I feel it's important to say something. If I get too stupid I'll edit it later.
I doubt that "you guys"(insert knowledgeable bonsai person's name who supports us noobs. I won't specify names since there's so many I'd forget to name someone important) understand how much your feedback means to someone in the same boat I'm in.
I've found zero local bonsai people. I've found myself actually trying to help others interested in the art which is a joke because I only know enough to realize I have a ton to learn. I give them Brent's website, my phone number, and that's about the best I can do for now.
However I'm absolutely obsessed with these lovely little trees and keep trying to learn something. Obviously it's going to get frustrating. Getting a response like Vance's makes me all silly sentimental so I'd just like to thank all of you who help us new guys out.