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Whats wrong with this display?

Whats right about this display?
 

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Dont know anything about display but I like this one the best of all I have seen so far
 

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I do have some close ups
 

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what's wrong with this display is that the tree and the scroll images are redundant. You have the image of the cliff/rock with the tree and the scroll shows the same thing. Would have been better if the scroll showed a moon or something like that. Would be better also if the accent represented an animal or small flowering accent.
 
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I agree with buddhamonk as to the redundancy of the images presented. I am also wondering about the small size of the accessory. I can't make it out from the photo, but I am sure it was different IRL. The question is, what is the artist trying to convey here? Is there a season involved? or a theme of some kind?

Other than that, I really like this display, especially the tree and its incorporation to the rock.

Chris
 

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The accent represented a turtle, I just didn't shoot a picture of it. I was sort of working:eek:
 

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The accent is two turtles walking toward the tree. The title was something like, "crossing the river".
 

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