I think it looks damned good for your first venture into pots. Sorry it broke while taking out the zig zags. And I don’t think there’s anything wrong with stains or oxides on pots. A lot of clay bodies are very light and fire very pale. I encounter that issue because the studio where I work only allows a few clays to be used. We fire to cone 10 reduction and many darker clays available here are cone 6 or lower and will slump or even melt at cone 10. I’ve tried all manner of different mixes, but getting a colorant evenly wedged into 10 lbs of clay is nearly impossible without a pug mill.
I think the wall thickness is fine. I often have customers note that my pots are heavy. Yes, they are intentionally that way. I have lost far to many pots to wind and raccoons, so a little thicker wall is dandy by me. As someone mentioned earlier, these are bonsai pots, not mugs. A thicker wall has advantages too, more insulation against cold and heat. There seems to be an issue that people equate thinner walls with better quality. That really is more a critique of one’s wheel skills and much less so in hand building. Perhaps with fine porcelains it may apply , but try making an 18” cascade pot w porcelain ( yes, right now I am slow drying an 18” cascade I'm doing on commission) In general I set the roller to 1/4 in for slab building. Walls hold up and I can actually accomplish much more that if I was doing an 1/8 wall.
Looks like you are off to a great start.cant wait to see more!