TheSteve
Chumono
I'll give my take on this tree from the first pic which is what would be my front. The branch on the right should be moved up a bit to break up the evenness of the two. Give it a bit of an arch so that the tip still ends up relatively even with where the branch leaves the trunk. A few horizontal bends in the branches will help tham relate better to the curving trunk. Then wire every single little shoot into a flatter spread. Anything not wired should be cut off. Make sure the tips of all shoots point up for better budding. This could be a really nice little tree in a few years with just a bit of detail wiring.
Here's my "terrible tone" post after resubmitting it the next morning. It says exactly the same thing as it originally did but was left alone after calling attention to it in a thread that does not exsist anymore.
You got a deal Will I won't post there anymore since I'm such a bother. I respect that, but do you mind if I still swing by KNOB and AOB to surf porn?