Winter is here for this tree presenting a much more chilling image than it did just a little over a week ago. I am considering Brian's suggestion of removing the straight-ish thick branch/trunk on the right but at this time I have kept it. Without it I think the tree's design is more "agreeable", but with it, I think it presents a more "wild" image which I think ultimately I may prefer for this tree. Still thinking this through.
Tough as always for a photo to portray the three dimesional quality of a tree, but in person it has a wonderful front to back sense of depth. Work will continue next spring.
I don't normally critique many trees here because they often go south, but I have always thought it was a shame, especially if the intent was not to insult, I think thoughtful critiques are a very useful and positive thing.
If this was not a tree that one might want to show in a winter state the right straight branch could possibly be left seeing it would be covered, I don't think you would ever really be happy with it. It does have taper... so I can see the argument for it staying... but it takes up alot of real estate in an area where it would probably be better suited with finer branching. So, I would have to agree with it's removal, perhaps not in it's entirety? , but instead back to a lower branch. This obviously is going to mess up the taper of the area, which would then mean time in development of fixing this.
I see you have other cut scars on the other heavy branch to the left and on the one that makes up the continuation of the main trunk, how do you plan on addressing these areas? Healing over, or carving uros?
I don't bring these up to insult, but merely to question your time frame with the tree... that if you are planning to heal these over, obviously you are going to still need to allow some branching to run free. So you still have some time involved working this tree. Which leads me back to the heavy branch in question...
It might be worth it long term, taking the heavy straight branch back down all the way to the very first branch. The one coming off the bottom right. Bending this up some and starting over in this area. I know it sucks, but would obviously pay off in the end. Something to consider.
Keep up the good work!